In the Afterword, Dodson sums up a lot of the information he
mentioned throughout the book. He does not mention any personal connections to
China, but does explain what “America and the rest of the world have most to be
concerned about…” (pg. 23). In our own conclusions, we are asked to connect our
topic to a greater picture, as well as include personal details (like why it is
important to us, how we feel about it, and what we have learned). Dodson sort
of has one last “fact dump”, as some would call it, in his conclusion. Also,
his last sentence, “But that’s a whole other story completely”, left me feeling
very incomplete (pg.236)! I would have liked to hear more about his own
connection with China; perhaps that would personalize his conclusion. It could
be a bit more inviting, but I do like that he was able to explain the big picture.
In my own conclusion, I also need to add more personal detail. It is difficult
to sum up my feelings though, because in doing so I think of more questions, which
ends ultimately with me feeling bad about the whole paper because there are
many questions I had not thought of. I understand the dilemma!
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